Pretty good, didn't expect it at all!
Short my ass, a flash can be an hour long and still be shit, this flash is awesome, you definetly deserve a spot on the top 50, and the daily first of course.
Enough ass kissing to you, on to the actual flash...
The graphics were superb, from start to finish, I really like this type of shorts, and I'm glad how this one turned up, I'm looking forward to see more of it, and maybe even more flash from you, I have yet to view all of your current ones, but from the looks from the ones I've already seen, your skills have been greatly improoving over the time. :)
The story was interesting, I wonder what will happen next, please don't take too long to bring us the sequel :P
I couldn't hear the character's voices that well, but it may be my crappy speakers, maybe it would make it easier to understand if you add subtitles to this one, and to the next ones as well.
A little background info would be cool too, I don't really know what goes on, apart from the blatant obvious... Maybe you could give us a little more info about that comic. Just a thought.
Overall, can't think of anymore to say, except for... Keep up the good job!